When Enemies Offend Thee

THE BOOK: When Enemies Offend Thee

PUBLISHED IN: March 2020.

THE AUTHOR: Sally Whitney.

THE EDITOR: Lori Draft.

THE PUBLISHER: Pen-L Publishing.

SUMMARY: Recently widowed, Clementine Loftis returns to her hometown in North Carolina looking for comfort and peace. Instead, she finds an angry former high-school classmate who sexually assaults her in a bizarre attempt to settle an old score.

When lack of evidence prevents police from charging him, Clementine vows to get even on her own. After her first attempt doesn’t pan out, she escalates her effort. When that fails, she escalates again … and again.

Clementine’s determination to make her attacker pay for what he’s done drives her to walk a fine, dangerous line between vengeance and justice, making her question who she really is and whether she can ever again be the woman she wants to be.

When Enemies Offend Thee is a provocative thriller that will have readers questioning their own friendships, loyalties, ethics, and the possibility of redemption.

THE BACK STORY: My first thoughts about this novel began with wondering how far a person would actually go to right an injustice that had been done to them. As I explored those possibilities and grew to know the main character, Clementine, I also wondered if she went to the edge, even if she didn’t go over, could she ever get back. In other words, could she redeem herself in the end?

The setting of the novel was another strong motivator. My first novel, Surface and Shadow, is set in a small southern mill town in 1972 when the mill is at its peak as the largest employer in town. I wanted to explore the effects on the people of that town 40 years later when the mill is no longer operating.

WHY THIS TITLE: The title comes from a comment by Pete, the town’s hardware-store owner, who frequently misquotes the Bible. “You know,” he remarks, “The Bible also says, ‘Rise up with might when enemies offend thee. From the depths of retribution spring resolution and respect.’” The passage doesn’t exist in the Bible, but it captures Clementine’s state of mind perfectly.

WHY SOMEONE WOULD WANT TO READ IT: It’s an engrossing page-turner. As an Amazon reviewer said, “[You] did not have to read very many pages before you knew this book was not going to be easy to put down until the last page was read.” It also raises challenging questions about justice, loyalty, friendship, and redemption.


“An unflinching look at sexual assault, Clementine Loftis’ story is both timely and timeless. In the end, it isn’t Clementine’s quest for justice that saves her but the community she builds along the way. A hopeful tale of overcoming grief and trauma when you least expect it.” — Amy Meyerson, bestselling author of The Bookshop of Yesterdays and The Imperfects.

“With evocative prose, complex characters, and an amazing sense of place, When Enemies Offend Thee is a first-rate thriller. And Sally Whitney is a writer to keep your eye on for years to come.” — Tom Bennitt, author of Burning Under.

“When Enemies Offend Thee is a riveting tale of crime, retribution, and healing. Sally Whitney is to be congratulated for creating a protagonist rarely seen in contemporary fiction: a dynamic, sexy older woman.” — Patricia Schultheis, author of St. Bart’s Way and A Balanced Life.

“Sally Whitney’s novel, When Enemies Offend Thee, comfortably begins as the homecoming story of a widow returning to her roots and fulfilling her lifelong aspiration of opening her own antique shop—but her dream is brutally affronted by a relic from her past. The warm and inviting prose makes it easy to stand alongside Clementine every step of the way, even when she takes justice into her own hands in unexpected ways. ‘You never know what you’re capable of until something pushes you to the edge,’ muses Clementine when even she realizes she may be taking a step too far. Whitney’s characters and plot twists offer up more surprises than the most richly curated antique
shop.” –Eric D. Goodman, author of The Color of Jadeite, Setting the Family Free, Womb: a Novel in Utero, and Tracks: A Novel in Stories.

“In her story of a woman in the aftermath of a brutal attack, Sally Whitney probes the uncertain line between the demand for justice and the hunger for retribution. The taut narrative keeps the pages turning in this exploration of what is gained or lost in one woman’s struggle to rebalance the scales of her universe.” -–Jennifer Bort Yacovissi, author of Up the Hill to Home.

AUTHOR PROFILE: Although Sally Whitney has spent most of her adult life in other parts of the United States, her imagination lives in the South, the homeland of her childhood.

“Whenever I dream of a story,” she says, “I feel the magic of red clay hills, soft voices, sudden thunder storms, and rich emotions. The South is a wonderland of mysteries, legends, and jokes handed down through generations of family storytellers, people like me.”

Sally is a fan of stories in almost any medium, including literature, theater, and film. She’d rather spend an afternoon in the audience across from the footlights than anywhere else, and she thinks DVDs and streaming movies are the greatest inventions since the automobile. She loves libraries and gets antsy if she has to drive very far without an audio book to listen to.

The short stories she writes have been published in literary magazines and anthologies, including Best Short Stories from The Saturday Evening Post Great American Fiction Contest 2017 and Grow Old Along With Me—The Best Is Yet To Be, the audio version of which was a Grammy Award finalist in the Spoken Word or Nonmusical Album category. Her first novel, Surface and Shadow, published by Pen-L Publishing in 2016, tells the story of a woman who risks her marriage and her husband’s career to find out what really happened in the suspicious death of a cotton baron in Tanner, North Carolina in 1972.

In nonfiction, Sally’s worked as a public relations writer, freelance journalist, and editor of Best’s Review magazine. Her articles have appeared in magazines and newspapers, including St. Anthony Messenger, The Kansas City Star, AntiqueWeek, and Our State: Down Home in North Carolina.

Sally is a member of The Authors Guild and has been a fellow at the Virginia Center for the Creative Arts. She currently lives in Pennsylvania. When she isn’t writing, reading, watching movies, or attending plays, she likes to poke around in antique shops looking for treasures.

“The best things in life are the ones that have been loved, whether by you or somebody else,” she says.

AUTHOR COMMENTS: There are a lot of books out there, and I’m always very appreciative when someone chooses one of mine. I hope readers will remember Clementine and her friends and understand that you never truly know how you’ll act in certain situations until you’re in them.

SAMPLE CHAPTER: https://www.amazon.com/When-Enemies-Offend-Sally-Whitney/dp/1683132114/ref=sr_1_1?crid=1C995NUSULEXW&dchild=1&keywords=when+enemies+offend+thee&qid=1594052914&sprefix=When+Enemies+Off%2Caps%2C135&sr=8-1

LOCAL OUTLETS: Local bookstores can order When Enemies Offend Thee from Ingram Distribution.


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Pen-L.com http://www.pen-l.com/WhenEnemiesOffendThee.html


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Recently retired after 35 years with the News & Advance newspaper in Lynchburg, VA, now re-inventing myself as a novelist/nonfiction writer and writing coach in Lake George, NY.

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